Rebecca's story line ideas

First idea

Thriller:  My first idea is to create a thriller. Where we have a girl who is petrified of the coming to terms with her boyfriends death. She tries to carry out her days as normal but an unknown moment in her life has led her to think that this monster is now following her around everywhere. Unbeknown to the audience, she is actually been followed around by her nurse. She has schizophrenia. The girl is in a constant struggle with how she wants to think and how she actually thinks. The reason for her schizophrenia is because her boyfriend died and she thinks she can still see him. 

Beginning: It begins with (character) who believes she has seen her boyfriend stood chatting who his mates. She begins to run along the corridor to reach him, but when she gets to them she is taken back to find she was seeing things, she breaks down and begins to cry. She goes to his gravestone, and we see her struggle with coming to terms with her loss. On her way home she sees who she thinks is her boyfriend and yet again it is just a random man. She cries out, screaming. 

Middle: She is laid in bed. not able to get to sleep. She begins to hear noises coming from underneath her bed, she panics and curls up into a ball. only protected by her duvet. There is no noise except for the noise she can hear. We then see her cuddling her giant teddy bear, which then cuts to her hugging her boyfriend in bed, and then cuts back to her and the bear. The next morning she has a huge argument with her mum, and she storms out the house. She the begins to panic (again) and thinks that the noises she heard from under her bed are following her. She tries to block them out and meets up with her best friend who tries to point something out to her. We as an audience are still un aware as to what is following her and what everyone else see's but (character) doesn't want to admit to herself. 

End: The last part of the video is her skipping school. We know this because we see her teacher trying to sign her onto the register but she isn't there. We then see her nurse, at the school who is looking for her, trying to find her as she thinks something bad is going to happen to her. We then have a chase with the nurse trying to find (character) before she thinks the worst possible thing happens. She goes in search of her, she looks by the boys grave, and in a coffee shop that they always went too. But she is know where to be seen. She is then found with a noose around her neck preparing to commit suicide.

Second idea

Indie: My second idea is a spin off of the wizard of oz type style story. It will be about a girl who goes in search of the most amazing chocolate in the world. It begins with her setting off on her journey. On her way she comes across different obstacles. These obstacles are different types of people telling her that different kinds of chocolate are best. She first encounters a crunchie kid, who is dressed in all gold. He tells her journey is pointless and that the sumptuous honeycomb and milk chocolate is mind blowingly awesome. She bats off crucnhie kid and continues on. She next meets mr botton, He is dressed in suit covered in buttons... he takes her